Hello there Demon spawn. You have my attention! I thought at first you'd built a Malfegor deck and that too I considered an especially interesting challenge—designing a Commander deck to play with no cards in hand is not easy. Then I looked up which one was Rakdos and which one was Malfegor and realized that while it wasn't the flavor of self-destructive awesomeness I thought it was going to be it was nonetheless self-destructive awesomeness that churned my imagination.
Building around wacky Commanders is something hard to do and I think the Demon tribal theme while an admirable attempt didn't lead you to a good mix of creatures. Lord of the Pit and Breeding Pool are both fun to play with but that doesn't really work so well anymore... It's not 1996 at the kitchen table anymore. We need to get more out of our cardboard than an overpriced Thrull generator. Tweaking the creatures will help as will tweaking the spells but the mana base is where we can make the most improvements at the cheapest cost thanks to the wonderful variety of low-price dual lands available to us for allied color combinations.
We'll start with a light touch more for color consistency and a bit of utility than anything else.
Rix Maadi Dungeon Palace – It just doesn't do enough for a colorless land. When will you want to activate it? How likely is it to actually disrupt the opponent? Not often and not often; neither are great answers.
Stensia Bloodhall – In place of Rix Maadi we add an actually useful land one that's capable of dealing out a little bit of pain to sensitive opponents or maybe going to work on a pesky planeswalker or two. Unlike Rix Maadi you'd want to activate this whenever you had spare mana and it can kill an opponent.
Mystifying Maze – A little bit of defense helps and Mystifying Maze can disincentivize an attack while still counting as part of your mana base.
Winding Canyons – A little extra utility so that you can play your spells more effectively and time your moves better.
Thawing Glaciers – For a deck that will often have to put a few lands in the graveyard Thawing Glaciers helps by rebuilding your mana base even after having had to do that a few times. All the help you can get is worth reaching for when it comes to mitigating your Commander's drawbacks.
Rocky Tar Pit Terramorphic Expanse Evolving Wilds – All effectively the same card and all three both fix your colored mana and work with the Crucible of Worlds that is otherwise not getting a lot of work done.
Shizo Death's Storehouse – You're looking for ways to get Rakdos to successfully punch the opponent and force the sacrifice trigger. Shizo's a free addition that happens to also just sneak key fatties through and thus is the best land for your deck!
Moving on to the artifacts I'm looking to cut out a fair chunk of them based on what the deck will actually accomplish and how much mana is too much mana. I think the deck should be less interested in rituals and ramping and more focused on building a stable longer game and maybe getting a little bit of play out of the downside Rakdos the Defiler comes with.
Altar of Shadows – Too expensive for the benefits it tries to provide even if it would be nice to be able to get three or four mana out of it each turn and make up for the lands that will end up in your graveyard. We'll rebuild the board instead; even Thawing Glaciers can be said to replace this card's effect for the deck.
Crystal Ball – Filtering is good but you need draw not filtering. Since this doesn't even replace itself it's just an investment to the board that profits you only on the extremely short-term. I'd reach for actual card advantage options before simply scrying away.
Mana Vault – Speeding out Rakdos doesn't seem to really be the plan unless the plan is to cripple yourself to cripple someone else and make everyone at the table kill you. We assume you won't just attack Rakdos into a removal spell and waste your time. We're building for eventual power not speedy power so this card is misaligned with the rest of the deck.
Rakdos Signet – Potentially just a liability. Signets die easy in this format.
Gauntlet of Power – A little too much mana for not quite enough benefit. I know you're trying to thrive still off limited resources but there are better ways to build towards that.
Whispersilk Cloak – My objections to this card are many even as it can sneak your Commander across unblocked to trigger his ability. Too expensive and only actually good with your Commander...and thus out of tune with the rest of what the deck is trying to accomplish in the meantime. The utility you were seeking is covered by Shizo Death's Storehouse plus your Swords granting protection.
Lightning Greaves – The obvious replacement for Whispersilk Cloak in that it makes the rest of your creatures incredibly dangerous while still adding that critical untargetability. Likewise this allows us to cut Anger from the deck since your haste option is neatly covered here...
Sensei's Divining Top – I hate to force the obvious decisions but if you don't have a Sensei's Divining Top but do have a Sword of Fire and Ice I'd be a little surprised. Black/red needs all the help you can get in ensuring you draw cards in roughly the right balance and Top is already the right card for your Crystal Ball to be...and is only made all the better by the fetch lands and Thaw that were already added.
Jar of Eyeballs – The card-advantage rather than card-filtering I was seeking with Crystal Ball... As I was cutting the Ball I was thinking of a jar of googly eyes even before I noticed there was no Sensei's Divining Top. Creatures will be going to the graveyard all the time in your deck and you want a fresh flow of cards going to your hand meaning the Jar should be good for a card a turn and possibly even an Impulse a turn depending on how quickly you're burning through resources.
Ichor Wellspring Mycosynth Wellspring – More interesting choices! Both work neatly with Rakdos's forced-sacrifice ability giving you a little bit of extra something for your minimal investment. Think of them as a way to get a little bit ahead at minimal price—Armillary Sphere is good but Mycosynth Wellspring will perform the same job and give you a sacrificial permanent that protects a real permanent for you. Even if your Commander isn't running quite yet board sweepers happen all the time and you'll get your profit out of the deal soon enough.
With that sorted out we'll move next to the non-creature spells and really get our hands dirty as I feel here is where some of the more important changes go towards shaping what you're trying to accomplish and achieving that goal.
Necropotence – I know of very few cards that get a player targeted for death than a Necropotence. Sure it's not the same Necropotence it would be if you were playing a Zur deck...but it's still a Necropotence and thus the kind of card that will cause a table to gang up on you.
Profane Command – Never a lover of this card am I it seems. Mana-wise it's just not efficient enough to excite me as a very expensive two-for-one. Providing unblockability of some degree or another to your Commander isn't enough to get me excited and the rest of it's just not that solid for the price you have to pay to get a meaningful effect.
Cover of Darkness – Used here solely to get your Commander past blockers once again with the Demon tribal benefits spread around pretty evenly but also fairly meaninglessly. Cut for something more efficient.
Breeding Pit – It's not 1996. There are easier ways to generate sacrificial lambs.
Living End – Not very good at what you're trying to do which is double up on Living Death effects to benefit your putting permanents in the graveyard at an accelerated rate. Cute but not where the deck should be trying to go.
Koth of the Hammer – Off-focus and not especially effective at that. Ritual effects are being cut on general principle and the likelihood that you can get the emblem and then use that to your benefit is not very high even before accounting for the fact that you're not designed very well for defending planeswalkers.
Choice of Damnations – Neither side of this terrifies me especially even if it could be an interesting question to pose. You're not aggro enough to make the damage side of this really threatening and thus will not be forcing many permanents to go to the graveyard over this.
Go for the Throat – I don't think you really need spot removal for one-for-one trades. Many-for-one removal will be brought to bear instead and you can even get that still within the same price range mana-wise.
Din of the Fireherd – Another fun sacrifice-causing effect and thus totally in theme for the rest of your deck. Sure it makes an Elemental rather than a Demon token but pressuring the opponent of your choice for both lands and creatures is pretty sweet. While you don't have very many red creatures Kher Keep can work overtime in this regard reminding everyone why you can neither trust nor ignore a Kobold.
Increasing Ambition – The new "it card" for me Increasing Ambition is an amazing upgrade to Diabolic Tutor. As a "fair" card it costs one more mana but offers you a powerful benefit just sitting in your graveyard waiting for later; as an "unfair" card you just grab Cabal Coffers and immediately jump to the flashback and double-Tutor with it instead of having the fair version and get not just the two cards of your choice but Cabal Coffers online as well.
Cauldron Dance – Another fun one considering how many comes into play abilities your creatures happen to possess. Mega-damage multipliers like Torrent of Souls already seemed to be of interest to you so I figured this one was probably in-theme as well for all the right reasons.
Void – A black/red staple this solves almost every problem and can possibly ruin someone's hand while you're at it. Intelligent pinpoint sweepers are hard to find in this color combination but Void does almost everything you need it to—if only the card said enchantment on it somewhere it'd be perfect.
Delirium – Sort of an interesting answer to unusual problems. Pinpoint removal didn't really cut it for me since it didn't work hard enough but Delirium is ideal for punishing those pesky Blightsteel Colossus players and taking out Kresh's controller unexpectedly. It generates positive tempo and sometimes a shocking amount of damage or can just prevent an annoying Eldrazi hit for a turn while punching someone for ten.
Urborg Justice – So your gameplan already involves having Grave Pact and a bunch of Kobold or Faerie tokens when Rakdos swings clearing the way. What if the board is even more packed than a Pact can handle easily? Or what if the plan doesn't come to fruition and no one lets a Grave Pact stay on the table? It's okay that's what Justice is for. A pile of your creatures going to the graveyard leads to a pile of everyone else's creatures going to the graveyard and as an instant you can do this between attacking (and sacrificing half of your non-Demon board) and them blocking (boooooo!).
Curse of the Cabal – Plan A involves an opponent of your choice putting half their permanents in the graveyard. Conveniently that is what this spell says it does! Sure you could suspend it and people would lose a stray permanent every once in a while but that's just the perfect way to never have this spell resolve—worse yet you might even provide a sacrifice outlet to someone who wanted one. Paying full price can drop the wind right out of someone's sails the same as if you'd successfully connected with your Commander and with a lot less setup involved and loss on your part of the deal.
Fire Covenant – I don't believe in playing Necropotence but I have no problem paying life. Fire Covenant is a pinpoint removal spell on crack—three mana and some life paid lets you kill everything your opponents control if you were so ambitious and that's the kind of ambition I can get behind.
You'll notice this leaves two empty spots which will be moved over to the creature department—I thought a few more bodies were in order if we could get them. Moving over to the critters we have nine to take out and eleven to put back in and then we can present the finished deck.
Fallen Angel – Sacrifice as a theme for fun and profit doesn't really fit here; it's more of a means to avoid crippling yourself too badly in your efforts to cripple others. There's a token making sub-theme it's true but dedicating cards like this to exploiting it is not actually a direction to really pursue when we can stay on target instead.
Anger – The need for this has been cut down thanks to Expedition Map increasing the effective access to Hall of the Bandit Lord and Lightning Greaves replacing Whispersilk Cloak. A dedicated card to this job already exists and this one can be pulled out for more Demon action.
Seizan Perverter of Truth – Drawing extra cards is good. Making opponents lose life is good. Letting opponents draw two extra cards a turn...not good.
Lord of the Pit – Lord of the Pit is cool but I'm thinking more about effective than cool. Xathrid Demon I can see wanting to work out but I'm hesitant to put too many Pit Lords into a deck when we can play less demanding creatures that are just as high-impact.
Havoc Demon – Cut because it can trigger at the wrong time and kill all your creatures. Replaced with a Demon with a penchant for murdering the opponent's creatures all the time and yours never.
Demon of Death's Gate – Big dumb fatty. Cut for something big and smart.
Abyssal Persecutor – It's fun as a social and political card to reach for leverage on the table as a whole by extending a favor. My experiences with the card however suggest that it's not terribly much of a favor since creatures die in a stiff breeze in this format and thus the security blanket you offer to wrap your opponents in is not enough to actually confer you any benefits. Without that aspect it's just an undercosted creature and I can think of better ways to do that.
Golgari Thug – If the plan is to sacrifice this to Rakdos and get the benefit of saving a creature of your choice from permanent death that's cool but not necessarily efficient. The rest of the time this just doesn't do very much very well and we'll focus on overselling cemetery plots instead.
Bloodshot Cyclops – Cool sure. On-theme no.
Switching over to these last few additions then we have seven demons going back in and four friends who play well with Demonic overlords. We'll start with the non-Demons first then return to the delicious tribal theme Rakdos brought to the table.
Mikaeus the Unhallowed – Hey look you sacrifice things for fun and profit? Mikaeus has a few suggestions about how to do this on the cheap. Well one suggestion really: cast him.' Sacrificing permanents en masse and having them persist back into play was already part of your plan—Cauldron of Souls shows that pretty neatly—and undying is the more powerful version of persist. In fact having both can give you surprising resilience if they're both in play at the same time since it becomes almost impossible to make stuff stay dead then.
Murderous Redcap – A small removal effect but thanks to persist it's another naturally built-in way to cheat on losing permanents when Rakdos attacks. A permanent that basically casts Arc Trail is a good deal even if Commander is more the home of 10/10s than 2/2s.
Myojin of Night's Reach – Cabal Conditioning with fewer conditions. One mana more but no hoops to jump through either. Early on in this series I identified Myojin of Night's Reach as one of the possible choke points of non-interactivity in this format but you're using it honestly to defend against combos instead of dishonestly to force one through so it's the right card and you can use it in clean conscience.
Switching tribes back to Demon let's look at our new friends:
Dread Cacodemon – My replacement for Havoc Demon in your deck. I've been seeking the perfect home for this one ever since the Commander decks came out and yours is the perfect fit. Demon tribal-themed likes making opponents lose permanents... Yep right where we want it. While it may be a bit of a pipe dream to think about using this to clear blockers a lot of mana and a Winding Canyons will actually do just that: attack with Rakdos and tap your Coffers for a bunch activate Winding Canyons and resolve the trigger then cast the Dread Cacodemon who just happens to tap all your tapped-and-attacking creatures and kills everything that could possibly stand in your Commander's way. I hope to hear back from you when not if this play occurs.
Tombstalker – Just a good deal on a cheap Demon especially since you have no problem putting spare permanents in your graveyard to make sure this costs practically nothing.
Flayer of the Hatebound – If persist creatures were good undying ones must be better. However this actually can just be a ridiculous kill card combined with Balthor or Living Death—a lot of things coming in at the same time can equal one or more dead opponents based on the sheer power of your army alone. Another new addition from Dark Ascension I've been waiting to see put to its maximum use and this deck uses all the sides of it pretty well.
Rune-Scarred Demon – Cheaper than Demon of Death's Gate and considerably more awesome. Which would you rather have trample or the card of your choice put directly into your hand? (Hint: the answer does not rhyme with "brample.")
Reaper of the Abyss – With all of these creatures dying I wonder if there's any way to benefit from this? Certainly! In fact we have a Demon for that. Reaper of the Abyss has pleasantly surprised me in Commander in every deck I've added it to since I keep thinking it'll only be so good and then it turns around to be so good. Since it doesn't rely on your creatures dying but any creature dying this is just a board-controlling critter that kills multiple problems per turn cycle at no price of investment save casting it.
Putting everything together we get the following decklist:
- 1 Big Game Hunter
- 1 Blood Speaker
- 1 Bloodgift Demon
- 1 Carnifex Demon
- 1 Dread Cacodemon
- 1 Flayer of the Hatebound
- 1 Fleshbag Marauder
- 1 It That Betrays
- 1 Mindslicer
- 1 Murderous Redcap
- 1 Pestilence Demon
- 1 Puppeteer Clique
- 1 Reaper from the Abyss
- 1 Reiver Demon
- 1 Rune-Scarred Demon
- 1 Stronghold Overseer
- 1 Tombstalker
- 1 Xathrid Demon
- 1 Balthor the Defiled
- 1 Endrek Sahr, Master Breeder
- 1 Kagemaro, First to Suffer
- 1 Malfegor
- 1 Mikaeus, the Unhallowed
- 1 Myojin of Night's Reach
- 1 Ob Nixilis, the Fallen
- 1 Rakdos the Defiler
- 6 Mountain
- 9 Swamp
- 1 Akoum Refuge
- 1 Blood Crypt
- 1 Cabal Coffers
- 1 Command Tower
- 1 Dragonskull Summit
- 1 Evolving Wilds
- 1 Graven Cairns
- 1 Mystifying Maze
- 1 Rakdos Carnarium
- 1 Rocky Tar Pit
- 1 Shadowblood Ridge
- 1 Stensia Bloodhall
- 1 Terramorphic Expanse
- 1 Thawing Glaciers
- 1 Urborg Volcano
- 1 Winding Canyons
- 1 Hall of the Bandit Lord
- 1 Kher Keep
- 1 Shizo, Death's Storehouse
- 1 Urborg, Tomb of Yawgmoth
- 1 Cauldron of Souls
- 1 Crucible Of Worlds
- 1 Darksteel Ingot
- 1 Expedition Map
- 1 Gilded Lotus
- 1 Ichor Wellspring
- 1 Jar of Eyeballs
- 1 Lightning Greaves
- 1 Mana Crypt
- 1 Mycosynth Wellspring
- 1 Sensei's Divining Top
- 1 Sol Ring
- 1 Sword of Fire and Ice
- 1 Sword of Light and Shadow
- 1 Black Market
- 1 Dragon Breath
- 1 Grave Pact
- 1 Nettlevine Blight
- 1 Oversold Cemetery
- 1 Phyrexian Arena
- 1 Cauldron Dance
- 1 Delirium
- 1 Fire Covenant
- 1 Urborg Justice
- 1 Black Sun's Zenith
- 1 Curse of the Cabal
- 1 Demonic Tutor
- 1 Din of the Fireherd
- 1 Increasing Ambition
- 1 Innocent Blood
- 1 Insurrection
- 1 Living Death
- 1 Patriarch's Bidding
- 1 Promise of Power
- 1 Torrent of Souls
- 1 Void
- 1 Wheel of Fortune
- 1 Bitterblossom
As is the tradition with Dear Azami for participating in today's write-in column you'll be receiving a $20 coupon to StarCityGames.com to help make some new additions to your deck. Whether this is to assuage my guilty conscience for telling you to spend half of that to get a Champions of Kamigawa uncommon or not I leave as an exercise to the reader but I do know that it seems to work out in the end for both of us—people write me letters so I'm happy and people get free Magic cards so they're happy. Pricing each of these suggested additions out we have the following:
|Din of the Fireherd||$0.49|
|Flayer of the Hatebound||$0.49|
|Jar of Eyeballs||$0.49|
|Rocky Tar Pit||$0.89|
|Curse of the Cabal||$0.99|
|Reaper from the Abyss||$1.39|
|Kagemaro First to Suffer||$1.75|
|Myojin of Night's Reach||$1.99|
|Shizo Death's Storehouse||$3.99|
|Mikaeus the Unhallowed||$5.49|
|Sensei's Divining Top||$9.99|
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-- Sean McKeown
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